Saturday, January 16, 2010

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To all PPUA students

For the week 17-21jan, please do speaking practices 4 and 5.
Kindly submit by 19jan and 21jan respectively.

Thank you and have fun.

31 comments:

amond said...
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amond said...

syahidah mohd rozi(ppua 1)
candidate B
muet practice 4

I am of the opinion that an inviting school clubs to visit the old folk home is the most effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. When the students even their teacher's clubs, they could be shared the old folk feeling. For example, the old folk share their experiences how they have to stay in the old folk home and why. Some of them have to stay there because nobody left in their family will take care of them and also even they still have family or children, but no one of their child wan to take care of them. The relationship between the students and the old folk will be more tighter when they are sharing their experiences with each other. Besides, the students of the school clubs also can give some help to disburden the old folk by giving them some supply foods and also money for them. The last method that the school clubs can do when visiting the old folk home is by doing the 'gotong-royong' activity. This is also can tight the relationship between the old folk and students. So, I am sure that this is the most effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. That is all from me. Thank you.

marziah said...

marziah bt mohd zain
ppur 1
candidate D
practice 4

In my opinion, I would like to suggest that one of the ways to improve the facilities in the home. One of the reasons why I suggest this is that the old folk will having no difficulties in facing their daily life routine. Bathroom is an important facilities for the old folk in the home. This is because by providing a suitable bathroom for the old folk, the problems that is related
with dirty old folk will never exists. Gardens also a good facilities for the old folk. This is because by providing a beautiful and comfortable gardens in the home, the old folk will get some fresh air and refreshing their mind by walking in the garden. Besides, the old folks too can sharing their story with the another old folks in the garden. Moreover, garden also is a place for doing some exercises like walking, jogging, etc. I am sure this is an effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

syhdah(prac4)
tq I am of the opinion that (an) inviting school clubs to visit the old folk home is the most effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. When the students even their (teacher's clubs), they (could be shared) the old folk feeling. For example, the (old folk) share their experiences how they have to stay in the old folk home and why. Some of them have to stay there because nobody left in their family (will) take care of them and also even they still have family or children, but (no one) of their child (wan) to take care of them. The relationship between the students and the old folk will be (more tighter) when they (are sharing) their experiences with each other. Besides, the students of the school clubs also can give some help to (disburden) the old folk by giving them some (supply foods) and also money for them. The last method that the school clubs can do when visiting the old folk home is by doing the 'gotong-royong' activity. This (is) also can (tight) the relationship between the old folk and students. So, I am sure that this is the most effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. That is all from me. Thank you. (approprite intro and closing. to impove on grammar)

nooraribahishak said...

tq mrziah.

In my opinion, I would like to suggest that one of the ways to improve the facilities in the home. One of the reasons why I suggest this is that the old folk will (having) no difficulties in facing their daily life routine. Bathroom is an important facilities for the old folk in the home. This is because by providing a suitable bathroom for the old folk, the problems that is related
with dirty old folk will never (exists). Gardens ( ) also a good facilities for the old folk. This is because by providing a beautiful and comfortable gardens in the home, the old folk will get some fresh air and (refreshing) their mind by walking in the garden. Besides, the old folks too can (sharing) their story with the (another) old folks in the garden. Moreover, garden also is a place for doing some exercises like walking, jogging, etc. I am sure this is an effective way to improve the quality of life of the old folk. Thank you.(acceptable intro and closing, after modal verb? )

mc ani said...

Practice 4
Candidate c
Norainiey bt mat
In my opinion,organize singing sessions is an effective ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk.One of the reason why I suggest this way because by doing this,it can release stress.Old folks can forgot about their problem through this activity also can avoid them from high blood pressure and another disease.Futhermore,singing sessions also can make them happy because this activity so happening.They can sing their favourite song,and in the some cases,they can forgot about their missing and waiting for their child for parents where their child don’t want to take care them anymore.More than that,singing sessions also can promote a spirit of family between old folks and committee of an old folks home.They can sing and dance together between them.I strongly believe that organize singing sessions is the best ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk.Remember,one day,we too will become like them.Thank you.

amond said...

syahidah bt mohd rozi (ppua 1)
candidate B
MUET practice 5

I am of the opinion that having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. In Malaysia, there are just a few schools have a demerit system and the others just have a punishment when the students made the discipline problems. Most of the schools should have the demerit system. This is necessary because for example, when one of the students commits a contravention of school's law, he will get the demerit mark. If he makes a lot of mistakes and his demerit mark that he collects which is higher than demerit's school level, perhaps he will be hanged from school. This demerit system should be given to the students who are having some serious discipline problems like always play truant, always absent to school without the logical reasons, homework and exercises never finished and others. By making the demerit system, it will become a lesson to this students that they will never do anymore of discipline problems in school. So, I assure that this is the most effective way to improve the discipline of the school. Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

tq nraini (prac4)
In my opinion,( )organize singing sessions is an effective (ways) to improve the quality of life of the old folk.One of the (reason) why I suggest this way because by doing this,it can release stress.Old folks can (forgot) about their problem through this activity( ) also can avoid them from ( )high blood pressure and (another) disease.(Futhermore),singing sessions also can make them happy because this activity ( )so happening.They can sing their favourite song,and in (the) some cases,they can (forgot) about their (missing and waiting for their child for parents where their child don’t want to take care them anymore).More than that,singing sessions also can promote a spirit of family between old folks and committee of an old folks home.They can sing and dance together (between them).I strongly believe that organize singing sessions is the best (ways) to improve the quality of life of the old folk.Remember,one day,we too will become like them.Thank you.(intro, closing and points are relevant. please view comments for your other friends to avoid similar mistakes.

nooraribahishak said...

tq syhdah (prac5)
I am of the opinion that having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. In Malaysia, there are just a few schools (have) a demerit system and the others just have a punishment when the students (made) the discipline problems. Most of the schools should have the demerit system. This is necessary because for example, when one of the students commits a contravention of school's law, he will get the demerit mark. If he makes a lot of mistakes and his demerit mark that he collects (which) is higher than demerit's school level, perhaps he will be hanged from school. This demerit system should be given to the students who are having some serious discipline problems like always play truant, always absent (to) school without (the) logical reasons, homework and exercises never finished and others. By (making) the demerit system, it will become a lesson to (this) students that they will never do anymore of discipline problems in school. So, I assure that this is the most effective way to improve the discipline of the school. Thank you. (acceptable intro, closing and points. please ask the boys to submit theirs. I have received none from them)

lyn said...

Zakira md saud,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate C
I am of the opinion that one of the best ways to improve the quality of the old folks is to organize singing seasons. I suggest this ways is because they can improve and shows their credibility in singing and dancing like young people have. As a young people have a show talented not excepting the old folk must have too because they need and suitable to singing a classic song like ‘penawar rindu’ and so on. This is also can make them happy and cheerful to what we have done for them because they will not feel ignored. I believe that this is an excellent ways to improve the quality of the old folk and at the same time we can make them happy in their live.

Zakira md saud,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate c
I am of the opinion that corporal punishment is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. I give the opinion is because this way is like as the punishment. Despite of that, we are not give a totally punishment as the person in the jail but more simple than that. This is also can avoid the student to do something badly such as truant,gangsterism and so on. This punishment is not bring a harmful for student but it will give a circumstantial effect for them for not doing something wrong again. I think this is the best way to give learnt for student to become more better.

Nur azura bt zakaria,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate c
I think the best way to improve the quality of live of the old folk is to organize singing sessions. Through this way, they can release stress in their mind and soul because they felt happy and enjoyable. Besides they felt happy, they also can aware and decrease from disease such as hipertension, mental’s problem and so on because their tension was gone when singing seassons. They also can close the relationship between old folks and other people. This can make they don’t feel lonely and still have a person who loved them. Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

tq zkira(sorry I don't know which oneis which because the same practice is written)
Zakira md saud,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate C
I am of the opinion that one of the best ways to improve the quality of the old folks is to organize singing (seasons). I suggest this (ways is) because they can improve and (shows) their credibility in singing and dancing like young people have. As (a) young people have (a show talented not excepting) the old folk must have too because they need and( ) suitable to (singing) a classic song like ‘penawar rindu’ and so on. This (is) also can make them happy and cheerful (to) what we have done for them because they will not feel ignored. I believe that this is an excellent (ways) to improve the quality of the old folk ( ) and at the same time we can make them happy in their live. (intro acceptable but closing to be clear and to end with a thank you and to improve on grammar)

Zakira md saud,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate c
I am of the opinion that corporal punishment is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. (I give the opinion is) because this way is (like as the punishment). Despite of that, we (are not) give a (totally) punishment as the person in the jail but (more simple) than that. This is also can (avoid) the student (to do) something (badly) such as truant,gangsterism and so on. This punishment (is) not bring (a harmful) for student but it will give a circumstantial effect for them for not doing something wrong again. I think this is the best way to give (learnt) for student to become (more) better.(similar comments as above)
Nur azura bt zakaria,ppua2
Muet practice 4
Candidate c
I think the best way to improve the quality of live of the old folk is to organize singing sessions. Through this way, they can release stress in their mind and soul because they (felt) happy and enjoyable. Besides they (felt) happy, they also can ( )aware and (decrease) from disease such as (hipertension), (mental’s) problem and so on because their tension (was) gone when singing (seassons). They also can (close) the relationship between old folks and other people. This can make (they) (don’t feel) lonely and still have a person who (loved) them. Thank you.(intro ok but where is your closing? to improve on vocabulary)

mc ani said...

HANIS HANINI
PRAC.4
CANDIDATE B
In my opinion, the best way to improve the discipline of the school is having a demerit system. Discipline among students is very serious cases and should be improve by having demerit system. By doing this, students will be more discipline and obey for the school rules. Students who breaking school rules will get their marks or demerit marks. The demerit system will teach the students and practice them on how to care abou the school rules. Students who get a high demerit marks have to meet the counselor for counseling and advice. Besides, the school have to inform to thei r parents about discipline among the students. The results, students will be more discipline in the school. Students have to follow all the school rules so that they did not get the demerit marks. I think by having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. Thank you…

lina said...

Practice 4
name:nur ashmalina bt alias
class:ppua 2
subject:muet speking test
candidate:B

My opinion, invite school clubs to visit the old folk home is the best ways to improve the quality of life the old folk. By doing this, I am very sure the old folk will be happy was someone visiting them. At the same time, the old folk need a attention and loving from people around them especially from their children because they are more sensitive when they become older. So, when the member of school club comes to visit them, automatically they will be happy and get some attention from us. Although their family rarely comes to visit them they will not be sad because the arrival of school club can release their missing to their family. Usually the school club involved is the club of welfare. This clubs play important role to visit such place a sit will give the members awareness to help other people. I think this is interesting ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk in order that old folk not sad and missing to their family. That’s all I have to say. Thank you.





Practice 5
name:nur ashmalina bt alias
class:ppua 2
subject:muet speking test
candidate:B

I would like to suggest a demerit system the interesting way to improve the discipline of the school. The demerit system is a system that giving marks to the student base on their behavior. One of the reasons why I suggest that, this is because demerit system can be produces the best student on their behavior. If the students have a good behavior they will get the high mark, but if the student have difficult behavior they will get mark very lower. The student get a loser mark will be spotted to action such as giving them punishment, cleaning, counseling and other. If student has a critical discipline problem they will be rid of the school. Also, by demerit system teacher has made sure who is involved in the discipline problem by calculating their marks. I am sure that having a demerit system will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school. Well, that’s all I have to say. Thank you.

lyn said...

nik nor haryani,ppua2
muet practice 5
candidate A

In my opinion, meeting the parents of errant students is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. By doing this, the parents can know the discipline problem that their children done in the school. The children's problem usually start at home and they bring it to school and make them do the discipline problem. The parents should be advised to spend more time on their children and control their behavious. This is because the children is learn from home. Morever, the meeting of the parents and teachers will cause the parents to advise the children at home to avoid them from doing those things. So, this way is very suitable to improve the discipline of the school. Beside that, the children also will changes their behaviour little by little after they seek advised from their parents and teachers. They may probably not doing the same thing anymore because they do not want their parents feel ashame with their teacher. As a conclusion, the meeting of the parents and teachers will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school.

lyn said...

nor azirah bt su,ppua2
muet practice 5
candidate B

In my opinion, having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. The demerit system is a system that giving marks to the student based on their behaviour. If the student have a good behaviour,he will get the high mark, but the other way around with the student who does not have a good behaviour. The student who will get a low marks will be spotted to take action for them to action include,giving them punishment such as doing the charity work and cleaning. Or if the student has a critical discipline problem, they will get rid of the school. By the demerit system, the teachers can make sure who is involved in the discipline problem by calculating their marks. It will be easy for the teachers to take an action to avoid the student from doing the same discipline problem next time. As a conclusion, I certainly sure that by having a demerit system will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school.

nooraribahishak said...

tq hanis hanini(prac4)
In my opinion, the best way to improve the discipline of the school is having a demerit system. Discipline among students is ( ) very serious (cases) and should be (improve) by having demerit system. By doing this, students will be more (discipline) and obey (for) the school rules. Students who (breaking) school rules will get their marks or demerit marks. The demerit system will teach the students and practice them on how to (care) (abou) the school rules. Students who get a high demerit marks have to (meet) the counselor for counseling and advice. Besides, the school (have) to inform (to) (thei r) parents about discipline among the students. The results, students will be more (discipline) in the school. Students have to follow all the school rules so that they (did) not get the demerit marks. I think by having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. Thank you…(relevant intro and closing. to improve on verb forms and vocabulary)

nooraribahishak said...

tq ashmlina(prac 4&5)
( )My opinion,( ) invite school clubs to visit the old folk home is the best (ways) to improve the quality of life the old folk. By doing this, I am very sure the old folk will be happy (was) someone (visiting) them. At the same time, the old folk need (a) attention and (loving) from people around them especially from their children because they are more sensitive when they become older. So, when the member of school club comes to visit them, automatically they will be happy (and) get some attention from (us). Although their family rarely comes to visit them they will not be sad because the arrival of school club can release their (missing) (to) their family. Usually the school club involved is the club of welfare. This (clubs) play ( )important role to visit such place (a sit) will give the members awareness to help other people. I think this is interesting (ways) to improve the quality of life of the old folk (in order) that old folk ( ) not sad and missing (to) their family. That’s all I have to say. Thank you.(to improve on intro and closing as well as subject-verb-agreement i.e sva)

(Practice 5)
I would like to suggest a demerit system ( )the interesting way to improve the discipline of the school. The demerit system is a system that (giving) marks to the student (base) on their (behavior). One of the reasons why I suggest that, (this) is because demerit system can (be) (produces) the best student on their (behavior). If the students have (a) good (behavior) they will get the high mark, but if the student (have) difficult (behavior) they will get (mark very lower). The student (get) a (loser) mark will be (spotted) to action such as giving them punishment,cleaning( ) , counseling and other. If student has a critical discipline problem they will be (rid) of the school. Also, by demerit system teacher (has made) sure who is involved in the discipline problem by calculating their marks. I am sure that having a demerit system will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school. Well, that’s all I have to say. Thank you.(relevant intro & closing but to improve on sentence structures)

nooraribahishak said...

tq hryni(prac5)
In my opinion, meeting the parents of errant students is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. By doing this, the parents can know the discipline problem that their children ( ) done in the school. The children's problem usually (start) at home and they bring it to school and (make them do the discipline problem). The parents should be advised to spend more time on their children and control their (behavious). This is because the children (is) learn from home. (Morever), the meeting of the parents and teachers will (cause) the parents to advise the children at home to (avoid) them from doing those things. So, this way is very suitable to improve the discipline of the school. (Beside) that, the children also will (changes) their behaviour (little by little) after they seek (advised) from their parents and teachers. They may probably not doing the same thing anymore because they do not want their parents ( ) feel (ashame) with their teacher. As a conclusion, the meeting of the parents and teachers will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school.(relevant intro, closing and points. to improve on vocabulary)

nooraribahishak said...

tq azirah(prac5)
In my opinion, having a demerit system is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. The demerit system is a system that (giving) marks to the student based on their behaviour. If the student (have) a good behaviour,he will get the high mark, but the other way around with the student who does not have a good behaviour. The student who (will get) a low (marks) will be (spotted) to take action for them (to action) (include),giving them punishment such as doing the charity work and cleaning. Or if the student has a critical discipline problem, they (will get rid) of the school. By ( ) the demerit system, the teachers can make sure who is involved in the discipline problem by calculating their marks. It will be easy for the teachers to take an action to avoid the student from doing the same discipline problem ( ) next time. As a conclusion, I ( ) certainly sure that by having a demerit system ( ) will be very effective to improve the discipline of the school.(acceptable intro and closing as well as points. to improve on grammar items and to end with a thank you)

lina said...

Farahim bt Badulah(ppua 2)
Muet practice 4
Candidate D
In my opinion, improve facilities in the home would be very beneficial to the old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of old folk home. Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However, it maybe cannot create a pleasant environment to them. Move importantly many home today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a constant medical care. Besides that, we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking care to them. Then these homes also must have the dietician. This is because by having the dietician, they can take care of the diet of the old forks. Other than that, we should have a large area around these homes like gardens and plants to make use of them by walking in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care their older. Therefore, I believe that by placing them in old folk homes, they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of. I am very sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way. That’s all from me. Thank you.

Muet practice 5
Candidate D
I would like to suggest that counseling is one of the other ways to improve the discipline of the school. Counseling usually has been carried out in school by the counselors. Therefore, the discipline board of the school have make sure that those who are already involved in undesirable activities get a proper counseling by the experienced counselors. Once the students are disciplined at school, they maybe can change their bad habits and do not give any trouble in school anymore. However, this way needs a lot of time to aware of students. This is not a problem because by giving proper and constant counseling to them, they will know how to take care of their personality and latter they will be good students. Moreover, the counselors should identity the students who are in a bad company and then have a meeting with them personally. Such that the counselors can recognize the one’s student deeply by having a slow, soft and proper talk with them. I believe that by doing this way, the discipline board of school can improve well in future. Hence, I am sure that my decision is right and firmly fix with all the above reasons. That’s all from me. Thank you.

Unknown said...

nur hashikin bt baharuddin(ppua2)
candidate d
muet practice 4

In my opinion, one of the best ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk is to improve the facilities in the home. One of the reasons why i suggest this is that it can make the old feel better and comfortable to live at the old folks home. Improving the facilities such as the home compound, bedrooms, toilets and so on. For example, by improving the home compound the old can released their stress and relaxing their mind then it also can make them feel that they are very valuable. In addition, to more improving facilities is to provide medical service at the home and then the home should have their own doctors and nurse to care of the old every time. This is important to make sure that the old are healthy or not. Moreover, many young people today do not have much time to spend on their older, so if they know that the old folk home have the best quality and services, they will reliance to place the old at the old folks home. So, I strongly believe that the best ways to to improve the quality of life of the old folks home is to improve the facilities in the home. That's all from me. Thank you.


muet practice 5

In my opinion, counseling is th best way to improve the discipline of the school. Counseling sessions is very important to students because it can make students to be better and achieve their goals, especially for students who had the disciplinary problems. Every schools should have counseling sessions for students. During counseling sessions, student will be expose on the advantages to be disciplined and disadvantages that they will have if they are not to be disciplined because by doing this, students will not let themselves to violate the school rules they already have the knowledge about that. Moreover, during counseling sessions too, students should sign their promise to not doing any discipline problems. So that, students will not able to have any discipline problems by doing this. So, I strongly believe that counseling is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. That's all from me. Thank you.

lina said...

Practice 4
Candidate A
I suggest that organize birthday parties often as one of the best ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk. One of the reasons why I suggest this way is the old folk will feel that they are appreciated and loved. Commonly, the old folk are a very emotional person so by doing this, their life in the welfare will be bright. While having a birthday party, we can have several activities like blow the balloon, drawing competition and many more to make the party more hilarious. These activities will provide love and excitement. So I am sure this is the best way to improve the quality of the old folk’s life.
By: anisha(ppua2)

Practice 5
Candidate A
I am of the opinion that meeting the parents of errant students is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. One of the reasons why I suggest this way is parents will more concern about their children attitude. In this meeting, teacher will let parents know how good or bad their children at school weather in curriculum or co-curriculum. Today, many parents spend their time on works and they do not spend on their children. When they go home, their children had already slept and tomorrow they will repeat the same thing so they don’t have anytime to check what their children do and what their problems. By doing this, they will know everything about their children problems and parents can solve this problem correctly. I am sure this is can improve the discipline of the school.
By: anisha(ppua2)

kieyra said...

muet practice 6
candidate c
zakira md saud PPUA 2

I fell that one of the best ways to conserve the water is to gazette cathment areas as reserves.By doing this way,the consumer will get a punishment if they intrude the areas like stealing source of water and so on.At the same time,it can avoid the disaster like landslid,flashflood and it also will cause global warming.In addition,this way also can avoid the jungle from such activities like deforestation that will cause air pollution,water pollution and others.Meanwhile it is also can protect the habitat of flora and fauna in the jungle.This is also can make our climate hve clean water,fertile soil and our environment in a good condition so that the food and erosion can be reduce.In conclusion,i think this is the best way to conserve the water.That all from me,thank you.


muet practice 7

candidate c

zakira md saud PPUA2

In my opinion,the best way to teach children about consumer right is to surf the net for information because this is not only fast but many information that we can get just only surf the internet.The children also can inform the knowledge with more detail in a true facts.On the other hand,when the children were informed about consumer right,they will not easy to be cheated by seller.On top of that,the children can more survive in world wide web (www) to get more information about that.Finally,i think surf the internet is the bwest way to teach children about their right because it just not only easy to get information but we can teach our children to be succesful going to face globalisation world.Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

tq frhim(pracs4&5)
In my opinion, (improve) facilities in the home would be very beneficial to the old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of old folk home. Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However, it (maybe cannot) create a pleasant environment to them. (Move) importantly many (home) today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a constant medical care. Besides that, we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking care (to) them. Then these homes also must have the dietician. This is because by having the dietician, they can take care of the diet of the old forks. Other than that, we should have a large area around these homes like gardens and plants (to make use of them) by walking in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care ( ) their older. Therefore, I believe that by placing them in old folk homes, they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of ( ). I am very sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way ( ). That’s all from me. Thank you. (see comments for your other friends)

Muet practice 5
Candidate D
I would like to suggest that counseling is one of the other ways to improve the discipline of the school. Counseling usually has been carried out in school by the counselors. Therefore, the (discipline) board of the school have (make) sure that those who are already involved in undesirable activities get a proper counseling by the experienced counselors. Once the students are disciplined at school, they (maybe can) change their bad habits and do not give any trouble in school anymore. However, (this way) needs a lot of time to (aware) of students. This is not a problem because by giving proper and constant counseling to them, they will know how to take care of their personality and (latter) they will be good students. Moreover, the counselors should (identity) the students who are in a bad company and then have a meeting with them personally. Such that the counselors can recognize the (one’s student) deeply by having a slow, soft and proper talk with them. I believe that by doing this way, the (discipline) board of school can improve well in future. Hence, I am sure that (my decision) is right and firmly fix with all the above reasons. That’s all from me. Thank you. ( be clear with your closing and improve on word choice)

nooraribahishak said...

tq shikin(pracs4&5)
In my opinion, one of the best ways to improve the quality of life of the old folk is to improve the facilities in the home. One of the reasons why i suggest this is that it can make the old feel better and comfortable to live at the old folks home. Improving the facilities such as the home compound, bedrooms, toilets and so on. For example, by improving the home compound the old can (released) their stress and (relaxing) their mind then it also can make them feel that they are very valuable. In addition, (to more) improving facilities is to provide medical service at the home and then the home should have their own doctors and nurse to care (of) the old ( )(every) time. This is important to make sure that the old are healthy or not. Moreover, many young people today do not have much time to spend ( ) (on) their (older), so if they know that the old folk home have the best quality and services, they will (reliance) to place the old at the old folks home. So, I strongly believe that the best (ways) to to improve the quality of life of the old folks home is to improve the facilities in the home. That's all from me. Thank you.(be careful with word choice)


muet practice 5

In my opinion, counseling is (th) best way to improve the discipline of the school. Counseling sessions is very important to students because it can make students to be better and achieve their goals, especially for students who (had) the disciplinary problems. Every (schools) should have counseling sessions for students. During counseling sessions, student will be (expose) on the advantages (to be disciplined) and disadvantages that they will have if they are (not to be disciplined) because by doing this, students will not (let themselves to) violate the school rules they already have the knowledge about (that). Moreover, during counseling sessions too, students should sign their promise (to not doing) any discipline problems. (So that), students will not (able to) have any discipline problems by doing (this). So, I strongly believe that counseling is the best way to improve the discipline of the school. That's all from me. Thank you.(refer to comments for your other friends)

amond said...

name:nor marziah mohd zain.
ppua 1.
candidate D
Muet practice 5

In my opinion,I would like to suggest that counseling is the best way to improve the discipline of the school.one of the reasons why i suggest this is that the students will be more discipline in the school.Advising students some advice is a good way that the counseling should be do to improve the discipline of the school.this is because,by advising the students they will realized that discipline is an important elements in the school.Without a good discipline,the students will having some difficulties to get a higher mark in their examinations and also in their cocuriculums.besides,the counseling can also invite the another teacher from the another school to give a speech to a students about the important of the discipline.this is because,there is some students who got a problems with their family is came from a poor family and having a problems with their family.By giving some speech to the students,they will realized about the mistake that they have done.Moreover,counseling also should provide a place for students to share their problems with the counselor.By sharing their problems that is related with the school discipline.I am sure this is an effective way to improve the discipline of the school.Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

tq mrziah(prac5)
In my opinion,I would like to suggest that counseling is the best way to improve the discipline of the school.one of the reasons why i suggest this is that the students will be more (discipline) in the school.(Advising) students some advice is a good way that the counseling (should be do) to improve the discipline of the school.this is because,by advising the students they will (realized) that discipline is an important (elements) in the school.Without a good discipline,the students will (having) some difficulties to get a higher mark in their examinations and also in their (cocuriculums).besides,the (counseling) can also invite (the) another teacher from (the another) school to give a speech to a students about the (important) of the discipline.this is because,there (is) some students who (got) a problems with their family (is came) from a poor family and (having) (a problems) with their family.By giving some speech to the students,they will (realized) about the mistake that they have done.Moreover,counseling also should provide a place for students to share their problems with the counselor.By sharing their problems that is related (with) the school discipline ( ).I am sure this is an effective way to improve the discipline of the school.Thank you.(acceptable intro and closing but with some grammatical errors)

lyn said...

Siti barriah bt mamat bakri,ppua1
Muet practice 3
Candidate A
In my opinion, one of the ways to promote tourism in our country is to carry out publicity through the mass media. Mass media is a main componet to promote our country to the tourisms. By doing this, the tourism will get more knowledge about interesting place which had in our country. When this happen can raise the tourism to visit our country. Besides that the information through the massmedia easy to believe by the people or tourism. By doing this, can also help the tourism to know about part with there want to visit. Had a many benefit by doing this way. So, we must carry out the publicity through the mass media to promote tourism in the country.

lyn said...

Siti barriah bt mamat bakri,ppua1
Muet practice 5
Candidate A
In my opinion, one of the best ways to improve the dicipline of the school is meeting the parents of errant students. Parents is the started of live to all man to improve the dicipline in students. By doing this, the teachers will can give a knowledge to the parents to improve dicipline in students. The knowledge which have given tom the parents will help the parents to know about the important of the diciplined in the their child. When this happend can raise the diciplined in the student and increase the level of diciplined of the school. The conclude, have a amny benefit when doing this way. So, the party of the school must do the meeting with the parents to improve the diciplined of the school.

nooraribahishak said...

tq bariah(pracs 3&5)
In my opinion, one of the ways to promote tourism in our country is to carry out publicity through the mass media. Mass media is (a) main (componet) to promote our country to the (tourisms). By doing this, the (tourism) will get more knowledge about interesting place (which had) in our country. When this happen ( ) can (raise) the (tourism) to visit our country. Besides that the information through the (massmedia) ( ) easy (to believe) by the people or (tourism). By doing this, ( ) can also help the (tourism) to know about (part with there want to visit). (Had a) many benefit (by doing this way). So, we must carry out the publicity through the mass media to promote tourism in the country.(acceptable intro, to end with a thank you and to improve your grammar. please check the difference of words tourism, tour and tourist)

(prac5)
In my opinion, one of the best ways to improve the (dicipline) of the school is meeting the parents of errant students. (Parents is the started of live to all man to improve the dicipline in students). By doing this, the teachers (will can) give (a) knowledge to the parents to improve dicipline in students. The knowledge which (have given) (tom) the parents will help the parents to know about the (important) of the (diciplined) (in) the their child. When this (happend) ( ) can (raise) the (diciplined) in the student and increase the level of (diciplined) of the school. (The conclude), (have) (a amny) benefit when doing (this way). So, the (party) of the school must do the meeting with the parents to improve the (diciplined) of the school. (acceptable introbut not the closing. to improve on grammar)

amond said...

Name:nik azliana awang hamat
Class:ppua 1
Candidate:c
Practice:4
I would like to suggest an organization of singing sessions to improve the quality of old folks in homes.The old folks will certainly be sad for be alone and being left by their children and family.A singing session will give them a minute to release their tension and have some joy.Futhermore.singing session will make the bond between the different culture of old folks become more tight.This is because,they came from different culture and religion that are Malays,Chinese,and and Indians.In this case,they can know each other’s culture by sing traditional songs from each religion such as “Dondang Sayang” song for baba and nyonya religion.Furthermore,the singing session will full their free times in homes with such beneficial and enjoyable activity.For the conclusion,I think this is the best way to improve the quality of the old folk’s life.Thank You.


Name:nik azliana awang hamat
Class:ppua 1
Candidate:c
Practice:5
I would like to suggest the corporal punishment to the errant students as the way to improve the discipline of the school.In many discipline cases in Malaysia’s schools,corporal punishment is the best way that affect the student to not do the error again.The pupils will afraid to do the error if every schoolmake a strict rule to punish any errant student.For example,the effective way of punishment are by asking the errant student to run around the field, or let them suffer from embarrassing to be beat in front of other student in the assembly.In this case,other student would not do the same mistake.Other than that,corporal punishment will open parent’seyes to teach their children about discipline.In order to protect their children form being punish by the discipline tachers,parents will first save them by teaching the positive manners in be a disciplined and dedication student.For the conclusion,I am very sure that corporal punishment is the best way to improve the discipline in school.Thank You.