In my opinion,improve facilities in the home would be very beneficial to tha old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of the old folks home.Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However,it maybe cannot create a pleasant environment to them. More importantly,many homes today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a constant medical care. Besides that,we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking there to them. Then,these homes also must have the dietican. This is because by having the dietican,they can take of the diet of the old folks. Other than that,we should have a large areas around these homes like gardens and ponds to make sure of them by walking in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care their older. Therefore, i believe that by placing them in old folks homes,they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of friends. I am sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way. That's all from me. Thank you.
tq frhim (prac4)In my opinion,(improve) facilities in the home would be very beneficial to (tha) old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of the old folks home.Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However,(it maybe) cannot create a pleasant environment to them. More importantly,many homes today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a (constant) medical care. Besides that,we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking (there) to them. Then,these homes also must have the (dietican). This is because by having the (dietican),they can take ( ) of the diet of the old folks. Other than that,we should have a large areas around these homes like gardens and ponds to make sure (of them by walking) in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care their (older). Therefore, i believe that by placing them in old folks homes,they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of friends. I am sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way (to what?). That's all from me. Thank you.(intro ok but make sure closing is clear. points are acceptable)
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In my opinion,improve facilities in the home would be very beneficial to tha old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of the old folks home.Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However,it maybe cannot create a pleasant environment to them. More importantly,many homes today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a constant medical care. Besides that,we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking there to them. Then,these homes also must have the dietican. This is because by having the dietican,they can take of the diet of the old folks. Other than that,we should have a large areas around these homes like gardens and ponds to make sure of them by walking in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care their older. Therefore, i believe that by placing them in old folks homes,they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of friends. I am sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way. That's all from me. Thank you.
tq frhim (prac4)In my opinion,(improve) facilities in the home would be very beneficial to (tha) old folks. This is because they need a good safe-keeping mainly from the management of the old folks home.Some of the old folks actually stay in this home because their family cannot look after them due to work commitment. Most of the homes actually already have good facilities and equipment. However,(it maybe) cannot create a pleasant environment to them. More importantly,many homes today should be improved with their medical facilities. For instance, the doctors and nurses have to stay there all the time to make sure that old folks get a (constant) medical care. Besides that,we should have the workers who are experienced and qualified for taking (there) to them. Then,these homes also must have the (dietican). This is because by having the (dietican),they can take ( ) of the diet of the old folks. Other than that,we should have a large areas around these homes like gardens and ponds to make sure (of them by walking) in the morning. Many young people today do not have enough time to care their (older). Therefore, i believe that by placing them in old folks homes,they will not feel lonely or bored because they have their own circle of friends. I am sure that by improving the facilities at the old folks home will be the best way (to what?). That's all from me. Thank you.(intro ok but make sure closing is clear. points are acceptable)
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