Thursday, January 7, 2010

GET CONNECTED

Assignment On-Line (AOL)

Hi to all PPUA 1&2 students.

This year we will use my blog (aribahNU.blogspot.com) for you to get your assignment and send in your assignment for me to correct them. You can also e-mail me at ishakaribah@gmail.com
So, let's GET CONNECTED for AOL.
I do hope you'll enjoy it and have lots of fun.

Please submit your first speaking exercise to this blog.


28 comments:

Kimi said...

name:nur hashikin bt baharuddin
class:ppua 2
subject:muet speking test 1(task A)
candidate:D

In my opinion, the best way to conserve our forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects. One of the reasons why I suggest that way is as we are already know that many forest in our country has been deforestation and the trees were cut down for many importance such as making dam, logging, for housing and so on. When the forest were deforestation, it regulates the balance of carbon dioxide and oxygen in the atmosphere as in the last 30-50 years there has been too much carbon dioxide and not enough oxygen thus leading to pollution. One way to offset the effect of deforestation and to make it more Eco-friendly would be to plant same amount of trees that were cut down. This is one of many reasons; it also keeps animals and diverse plant species alive. So, I strongly believe that to conserve our forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects. That’s all from me. Thank you.

amond said...

from: syahidah bt mohd rozi(PPUA 1)
candidate: A

In my opinion, one of the best way to conserve the forests is to gazette more forests as national parks. As we know today, many forests are not taking care very well. So, the government have to take care about them and gazette them as national parks.This will prevent the irresponsible person from doing any dangerous activity. The forests are not just only can be protected but also the wild animal's habitats. This way can avoid the wild animals from extinction. Besides, the forests are very important to our life. They can produced the oxygen gas during photosynthesis process and we need the oxygen gas for breathing to survive. I believe that this is an effective way to increase the quality or forests too.

nooraribahishak said...

tq shikin. see my comments in the brackets.
In my opinion, the best way to conserve our forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects.(simple but correct intro) One of the reasons why I suggest that way is as we (are) already know that many (forest) in our country has been (deforestation) and the trees (were) cut down for many (importance) such as (making) dam, logging, for housing and so on. When the forest (were deforestation), it regulates the balance of carbon dioxide and oxygen in the atmosphere as in the last 30-50 years there has been too much carbon dioxide and not enough oxygen thus leading to pollution. One way to offset the effect of deforestation and to make it more Eco-friendly would be to plant same (amount) of trees that were cut down. This is one of many reasons; it also keeps animals and diverse plant species alive. So, I strongly believe that to conserve our forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects. That’s all from me. Thank you.(simple closing but correct) other comments (generally we use present tense, wrong sva, wrong vocab but good sttempt in reasons provided)

nooraribahishak said...

tq syahidah. see comments in the brackets.
In my opinion, one of the best way to conserve the forests is to gazette more forests as national parks.(similar comment as shikin) As we know today, many forests are not (taking) care very well. So, the government have to take care (about) them and gazette them as national parks.This will prevent the irresponsible person from doing any dangerous activity. (The forests are not just only can be protected but also the wild animal's habitats.--something missing here?) This way can avoid the wild animals from extinction. Besides, the forests are very important to our life. They can (produced) the oxygen gas during photosynthesis process and we need the oxygen gas for breathing to survive. I believe that this is an effective way to increase the quality or forests too.(where's your closing?) other comments (wrong verb form used but good attempt on points)

azizul hakim said...

name:Nik azliana awang hamat
class:ppua1
subject:muet speaking test1(task A)
candidate:C
I would like to suggest to launch "Plant-a-Tree" campaign in housing estates as the way to conserve our forest in Malaysia.One of the reasons why I suggest this way is because such a big campaign like thiswould attarck more Malaysian's fat cats to join.From the joining of the fat cats.Malaysia will have more allotments to do such a same big campaign.
Furthermore,by this campaign,Malaysian will be more co-operate by the attemp in saving our forest.This campaign is very suit to allow the message of "one malaysia" from government.Malaysian from any nation will support this campaign and try to be more co-operate with each other in a positive way.
Moreover."plant-a-tree" campaign will need attemp from the people to give some energy and sweat.so,in a way to save forest,we also can keep a healthy life by doing the gardening activity.So.i strongly believe that "Plant-a-Tree" campaingn ic the best way to conserve our forest.Thank you.

amond said...

name:nor marziah mohd zain
class:ppua1
subject:muet speaking test.task 1
candidate:D
I suggest that one of the best ways to conserve the forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects,we can actually conserve our forest from being destroyed from this country.
Moreover,the important of the forest will be retained from the extinction.Besides,forest also can provide a benificial uses for humans activities,for example,making a door,chair,desk,etc.By intensified the forest,we can actually introduce a lot of trees to a new generation in the future.Besides,forest can also provide places for flora and fauna habitat.This can actually attract more tourism to tourist in our country.i strongly believe that intensify forest-replanting project is the best way to conserve the forest.Thank you.

nooraribahishak said...

tq azliana. comments in the brackets.
I would like to suggest to launch "Plant-a-Tree" campaign in housing estates as the way to conserve our forest in Malaysia. (good attempt in different sentence structure)One of the reasons why I suggest this way is because such a big campaign like thiswould (attarck) more Malaysian's fat cats to join.(From the joining of the fat cats.Malaysia will have more allotments to do such a same big campaign.)--not quite related explanation.
Furthermore,by this campaign,Malaysian will be more (co-operate) (by the attemp) in saving our forest.This campaign is very (suit) to (allow) the message of "one malaysia" from government.Malaysian from any (nation) will support this campaign and try to be more (co-operate) with each other in a positive way.
Moreover."plant-a-tree" campaign will need (attemp) from the people to (give some energy and sweat).so,in a way to save forest,we also can keep a healthy life by doing the gardening activity.So.i strongly believe that "Plant-a-Tree" campaingn ic the best way to conserve our forest.Thank you.(relevant closing)other comments(be careful with vocab to use suitable word but good explanation as it is related to current situation. can add specific example for reality)

nooraribahishak said...

tq normrziah. comments in the brackets.
I suggest that one of the best ways to conserve the forest is to intensify forest-replanting projects,we can actually conserve our forest from being destroyed from this country.(refer to samples to improve your words arrangement)
Moreover,the (important) of the forest will be (retained) from the extinction.Besides,forest also can provide (a) (benificial uses) for humans activities,for example,making a door,chair,desk,etc.By (intensified) the forest,we can actually introduce a lot of trees to (a) new generation in the future.Besides,forest can also provide places for flora and fauna habitat.This can actually attract more (tourism to) tourist (in) our country. i strongly believe that intensify forest-replanting project is the best way to conserve the forest.Thank you.(relevant closing)others(improve your choice of words by refering to the dictionary but good flow of ideas i.e points followed by supporting details)

lina said...

name:nur ashmalina bt alias
class:ppua 2
subject:muet speking test 1(task A)
candidate:B

In my opinion, enforce laws against indiscriminate or illegal logging is the best ways to conserve the forest in Malaysia country. This is because indiscriminate or illegal logging very critical in our country. If not control, this will be effect to human, animal, and plant. Also, why I suggest this is that it can give awareness to the people does not perform illegal logging and cutting down the tree. It is because amount to forest very important in our life. The fine and punishment to the people involved in order that the people can be realize and the forest can be conserve. For examples, the government had enforce the Law of Nature Quality 1974,for conserve our forest from illegal logging and cutting down the tree. I am sure this is the best ways to conserve forest in our country.

amond said...

name: norfarahim bt bedullah
class: ppua2
candidate: D

I suggest that an intensity forest-replanting projects as one of the other ways to conserve the remaining forest in our country. This way will make sure that our forest still maintain for the day onwards. By doing this, we can also safe the living things which have depend on forest to survive. Tropical forest are home to many animals and plant species, so we must keep our forest to ensure that all of them will remain there. I think that is all from me. Thank you.

mc ani said...

Norainiey bt Mat PPUA2
Candidate c
My suggestion is launch ‘Plant-A-Tree’ campaign in housing estate to conserve our forest.Planting a tree is a easy and effective ways.I suggest this way because plant a tree in a big amount can avoid heat island at the big city.It can give a comfortable life to the resident.At the same time,this campaign can cool down environment temperature.This way can avoid earth from global warming.Moreover,it is a good way for residents to work together as a team.It will promote friendship,fellowship,cooperation,and community spirit.Finally,it is a good way to reduce the carbon dioxide in the air.I believe that plant a tree is an effective way to conserve our forest..


Nor Azura bt Zakaria
Candidate c
In my opinion,launch ‘Plant-A-Tree’ campaign in housing estate is the best ways to conserve the forest.This is because it can produce clean air and good environment to all people et housing estate from global warming.So,this ways can avoid people from any negative effects such as skin’s problem.Besides that,’Plant-a-tree campaign is the best because it can encourage the people’s awareness about the important of trees in their life.If the people from housing estates take his campaign seriously,it can produce the ‘Green Earth’.Finally,this campaign is the best way to conserve the forest

Wan NorHanis Hanini bt Wan Abdull Hamid
Candidate b
I decide that the best way to conserve the forest in our country is to enforce laws against indiscriminate.Goverment should take this effective way to conserve the forest.By doing this way,people who are ofen cutting down the trees,will have awareness on how to conserve forest.In addition,people also will be warn so they will not doing such activity on their own way.The government should enforce the Law of Nature Quality 1974 in our country.This law states that every project that may risk to the destroying of nature is not allowed.I am sure this is an effective and he best way to conserve the forest in our country

nooraribahishak said...

tq ashmlina.
In my opinion, enforce laws against indiscriminate or illegal logging is the best (ways) to conserve the forest in Malaysia (country). This is because indiscriminate or illegal logging () very critical in our country. If not (control), this (will be effect to) human, animal, and plant. Also, why I suggest this is that it can give awareness to the people (does not) perform illegal logging and cutting down the tree. It is because (amount to) forest very important in our life. (The fine and punishment to the people involved in order that the people can be realize and the forest can be conserve)--(re-do this sentence). For examples, the government (had enforce) the Law of Nature Quality 1974,for (conserve) our forest from illegal logging and cutting down the tree. I am sure this is the best (ways) to conserve forest in our country.(correct intro and closing but end with a thank you. refer to the notes for correct sentence structures)

nooraribahishak said...

tq frahim.
I suggest that an intensity forest-replanting projects as one of the other ways to conserve the remaining forest in our country. This way will make sure that our forest ()still (maintain) for the day onwards. By doing this, we can also (safe) the living things which (have) depend on forest to survive. Tropical forest are home to many animals and plant species, so we must keep our forest to ensure that all of them will remain there. I think that is all from me. Thank you.(intro ok but no closing. you have not really explain about to intensify thr forest replanting and be careful with the correct verb forms)

nooraribahishak said...

tq norainiey.
My suggestion is launch ‘Plant-A-Tree’ campaign in housing estate to conserve our forest.(correct intro) Planting a tree is (a) easy and effective (ways).I suggest this way because plant a tree in a big amount can avoid heat island (at) the big city.It can give a comfortable life to the resident.At the same time,(this campaign)? can cool down environment temperature.(This way)? can avoid () earth from global warming.Moreover,it is a good way for residents to work together as a team.It will promote friendship,fellowship,cooperation,and community spirit.Finally,it is a good way to reduce the carbon dioxide in the air.I believe that plant a tree is an effective way to conserve our forest..(relevant points but should end with a thank you and pay attention to the pronouns used)

nooraribahishak said...

tq azura.
In my opinion,launch ‘Plant-A-Tree’ campaign in housing estate is the best (ways) to conserve the forest.(correct intro)This is because it can produce clean air and good environment to all people (et) housing estate from global warming.So,this (ways) can avoid people from any negative effects such as skin’s problem.(how does global warming affect skin?)Besides that,’Plant-a-tree campaign is the best because it can encourage the people’s awareness about the (important) of trees in their life.If the people from housing estates take (his) campaign seriously,it can produce the ‘Green Earth’.Finally,this campaign is the best way to conserve the forest.(closing is ok but should end with a thank you)

nooraribahishak said...

tq hanis.
I (decide) that the best way to conserve the forest in our country is to enforce laws against indiscriminate.()Goverment should take this effective way to conserve the forest.By doing this way,people who are (ofen) cutting down the trees,will have (awareness) on how to conserve forest.In addition,people also will be (warn) so they will not (doing) such activity (on) their own way.The government should enforce the Law of Nature Quality 1974 in our country.This law states that every project that may risk to the destroying of nature is not allowed.I am sure this is an effective and (he) best way to conserve the forest in our country(points acceptable but should end with a thank you n be more careful with grammatical errors)

shafiq said...

name : shaiful shafiq hamidi b mohd noor
class : PPUA 2
candidate : C , MUET practice 1
In my opinon, launch ‘plant-a-tree’ campaign in housing estates will be the best idea to conserve our forest. one of the reasons why i suggest this because it will provide more clean air for residence. besides that, this campaign also will reduce a chance for greenhouse effect and glabal warming to happen there. Moreover,it is a good way for residents to work together as a team.It will promote friendship,fellowship,cooperation,and community spirit.Finally,it is a good way to reduce the carbon dioxide in the air.I believe that plant a tree is an effective way to conserve our forest..

shafiq said...

name : shaiful shafiq hamidi b mohd noor
class : PPUA 2
candidate : C , MUET practice 2
from my point of view, one of the best ways to encourage the public to donate blood is to give free medical treatment to blood donors. we can attract more public to donate their blood by doing this. moreover, we can save more life because we can provide blood to someone who really need it and also we can save blood donors who are in emergencys and need that free medical treatment. with that reason, i strongly believe that the best way to encourage the public to donate blood is to give medical treatment to blood donors

lyn said...

norfaslinda bt murad,ppua2
muet practice 1
candidate A

I am of the opinion that one of the best ways to conserve the forests is to gazette more forests as national parks. The forests is to gazette to avoid our forest is extinct. Besides that, it also is to avoidanimals and plants is extinct. On the other hand, gazette more forests as national parks will provide a good form of relaxation and a healthy way for public to release whatever stress that they may have. Futhermore,it also can less a polluted product by destroy of forest. I am sure this is an effective way to conserve our forest. That's all from me. Thank you.

lyn said...

zakira md saud,ppua2
muet practice 1
candidate C

In my opinion,one of the best ways to conserve the forests is to launch 'plant-a-tree' campaign in housing estate. One of the reasons why I suggest this ways is because the plant-a-tree can reduce our environmental temperature from the effect of global warming. At the same time,by doing this way, we can reduce the carbon dioxide content in the air through the tree which absorb the gas for photosynthesis. Moreover, it is good way for community to work together and promote cooperation, friendship and fellowship. Finally,the 'plant-a-tree' is the best way to conserve the forest because it has many benefics for all living in the earth.

nooraribahishak said...

tq syfiq prac 1 and 2)
In my opinon, launch ‘plant-a-tree’ campaign in housing estates will be the best idea to conserve our forest. one of the reasons why i suggest this ( ) because it will provide (more clean) air for (residence). besides that, this campaign also will reduce a chance for greenhouse effect and (glabal) warming to happen there. Moreover,it is a good way for residents to work together as a team.It will promote friendship,fellowship,cooperation,and community spirit.Finally,it is a good way to reduce the carbon dioxide in the air.I believe that plant a tree is an effective way to conserve our forest. (intro, points and closing are acceptable but courtesy to end with thank you)
(prac2)
from my point of view, one of the best ways to encourage the public to donate blood is to give free medical treatment to blood donors. we can attract more public to donate their blood by doing this. moreover, we can save more (life) because we can provide blood to someone who really (need) it and also we can save blood donors who are in (emergencys) and need that free medical treatment. with that reason, i strongly believe that the best way to encourage the public to donate blood is to give medical treatment to blood donors. (similar comments as prac 1 and please view comments for your other friends and avoid making similar errors)

nooraribahishak said...

tq fslnda (Prac1)
I am of the opinion that one of the best ways to conserve the forests is to gazette more forests as national parks. The forests is (to) (gazette) to avoid our forest (is) extinct. Besides that, it also is to (avoidanimals) and plants (is) extinct. On the other hand, gazette more forests as national parks will provide a good form of relaxation and a healthy way for public to release whatever stress that they may have. (how?)(Futhermore),it also can (less a polluted product by destroy of forest). I am sure this is an effective way to conserve our forest. That's all from me. Thank you. (intro, closing acceptable but to improve sentence structures and view comments for your other friends)

nooraribahishak said...

tq zkira (prac1)
In my opinion,one of the best ways to conserve the forests is to launch 'plant-a-tree' campaign in housing estate. One of the reasons why I suggest this (ways) is because the plant-a-tree can reduce our environmental temperature from the effect of global warming. At the same time,by doing this way, we can reduce the carbon dioxide content in the air through the tree which absorb the gas for photosynthesis. Moreover, it is ( )good way for community to work together and promote cooperation, friendship and (fellowship). Finally,the 'plant-a-tree' is the best way to conserve the forest because it has many (benefics) for all living ( ) (in) the earth. (relevant intro, closing and points but courtesy to end with a 'thank you".please see comments for your other friends to avoid similar mistakes).

lina said...

Practice 1
Candidate A
I am of the opinion that gazette more forest as national parks as the best way to conserve the forests. One of the reasons why I suggest this is to decrease the forest cut down. Forest acts as gases balancer at the atmosphere. It takes in carbon dioxide that produced by human activities and release oxygen for all living thing uses. If more forest is cutting down, it can affect all of living thing in this world with very serious problem like pollutions, acid rains, global warming and etc. This way also protect the endangered animals like tiger, tapir, orang utan and many more that lives in forest. By doing this, the coming generation will have the opportunity to enjoy all this beauty. I am sure this is an effective way to promote tourisms too.
By;anisha,ppua2

nooraribahishak said...

tq anisha(prac1)
I am of the opinion that (gazette) more forest as national parks as the best way to conserve the forests. One of the reasons why I suggest this is to decrease the forest cut down. Forest acts as (gases balancer) (at) the atmosphere. It takes in carbon dioxide that ( ) produced by human activities and release oxygen for all living thing uses. If more forest is (cutting) down, it can affect all of living thing in this world with very serious problem like pollutions, acid rains, global warming and etc. This way also (protect) the endangered animals like tiger, tapir, orang utan and many more that (lives) in forest. By doing this, the coming generation will have the opportunity to enjoy all this beauty. I am sure this is an effective way to promote tourisms too.(refer to comments for your other friends)

lyn said...

Siti barriah bt mamat bakri,ppua 1
Muet practice 1
Candidate B
In my opinion, one ways to converse the forest in our country is to enforce laws agains indiscriminate or illegal logging. Like, give the suitable fine for illegal logging or indiscriminate which want to destroyed our forest. By doing this the forest in our country will saved from there. This is because they will think many time to take the timber or doing the bad thing to our forest without permission from any porty with had the authorities. This way also can raise our conscrounsness about the important of the forest to all people. Besides that, can avoid the illegal logging from increase. Have a many benefits when do this way, so we can do this way to conserve the forest in our country.

nooraribahishak said...

tq bariah(prac 1)
In my opinion, one (ways) to (converse) the forest in our country is to enforce laws (agains) indiscriminate or illegal logging. Like, give the suitable fine for illegal logging or indiscriminate which want to (destroyed) our forest. By doing this the forest in our country will ( ) saved from (there). This is because they will think many time to take the timber or doing the bad thing to our forest without permission from any (porty) (with had the authorities). This way also can raise our (conscrounsness) about the (important) of the forest to all people. Besides that, can avoid the illegal logging from (increase). (Have a) many benefits when (do this way), so we can do this way to conserve the forest in our country. (see my comments on your other assignments)

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